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GAMSAT Section 2 quote prompts: Bureaucracy

1 GAMSAT-style prompt on bureaucracy. Each gives you five comments that disagree, so your job is to find the tension and argue a clear position. Give yourself about 30 minutes per essay.

Task B · ReflectivePrompt 1 of 1

Consider the following comments on bureaucracy.

  • Bureaucracy is the art of turning a person into a case.

  • The form was designed for everyone, which is why it fits no one in particular.

  • Every rule that protects us from the worst official also frustrates the best one.

  • We curse the queue until we remember the chaos it replaced.

  • A system that asks no questions about you is also one that will never see you.

Write a reflective piece in response to one or more of these comments. Your essay will be assessed on the quality of your thinking and the way you express it.

A way into this prompt

A reflective thesis is that the experience of dealing with a large impersonal system, a hospital, an immigration office, a university, teaches something uncomfortable about how easily a whole person becomes a number, and yet how the alternative might be worse. Open with a remembered encounter with the machinery, the hours on hold, the form that had no box for your actual situation, the clerk bound by a rule that made no sense for you. Then work the tension: the rules that reduce us to cases are the same rules that stop our fate from depending on one official's mood, so the impersonality that frustrates is also a kind of fairness. A useful structural move contrasts how it feels to be processed by a system against how it would feel to be entirely at the mercy of someone's whim. Caution: resist the easy rant that bureaucracy is simply soulless, since the longing for it to just see me is also a longing for someone to be allowed to bend the rules, which is exactly how favouritism begins.

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