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GAMSAT Section 2 quote prompts: Success

1 GAMSAT-style prompt on success. Each gives you five comments that disagree, so your job is to find the tension and argue a clear position. Give yourself about 30 minutes per essay.

Task A · ArgumentPrompt 1 of 1

Consider the following comments on success.

  • We let the world define success for us and then wonder why winning feels so empty.

  • A culture that measures success in one currency will quietly bankrupt everyone who counts in another.

  • Success is getting what you want, happiness is wanting what you get.

    Proverb

  • The ladder of success is easiest to climb when someone else is holding it steady underneath you.

  • Every visible triumph rests on a hundred quiet failures nobody chose to photograph.

Write a piece in response to one or more of these comments. Your essay will be assessed on the quality of your argument and the way you express it.

A way into this prompt

A defensible thesis is that success is a borrowed yardstick, usually handed to us by our society before we have asked whether its measurements match what we actually want from a life. Open by conceding that shared standards are not all bad, since visible markers of achievement coordinate effort and reward genuine contribution. Then press the harder claim: when success is defined narrowly, by wealth, status or fame, it crowds out goods that cannot be ranked, and it shames everyone whose excellence is uncounted. A useful third move examines how success is sold as the fruit of individual merit while quietly resting on inherited advantage and luck. Caution: avoid the easy inversion that all worldly success is hollow, which conveniently flatters those who never risked pursuing it.

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